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Passage from My Novel..

Mon Feb 18, 2008, 7:56 PM
This is an excerpt from my book..Got bored, wrote it, here it is.

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"There," I hissed to myself, taking a sharp breath. He held her forcibly to his side, whispering in her ear. Whatever Ellis was telling her, it was clearly terrifying her. A ripple passed through her slender body, and she attempted to pull away. It made me sick to think he'd done this before, and gotten away with it. That he'd killed so many people, just like this; Only this time, I'd be here to stop him.

I moved fluidly after them, listening as her struggles became more and more frantic. When she stopped, and Ellis was distracted with drinking, I'd get my chance.

"Let me go, Ellis," she snapped. "Let me-" she broke off, and I paused to let him get a start. There was a muffled shriek only a vampire, like Ellis and myself, would have been able to hear. Like an actor on cue, I slipped forward, holding the nine-inch stake in my right hand as I advanced on them.

Ellis held her close, his jaws pressed to her throat. He was completely oblivious to everything but his meal. Moving swiftly, I rushed him. The stake caught him in the small of the back, and he tore away from her with a roar. He arched his back in pain, trying to pull away from the stake buried in his cold flesh, when I threw him backwards. The oaken shaft broke through his ribcage and out the front of his shirt, and he let out an dying wail.

Die, you damned traitor, I thought with a vengeful glance. Finally, I was rid of that piece of scum. When she whimpered, it brought my attention back to her. I looked up, and she had one pale hand clutching to her bleeding throat, the dark blood dripping down her front. In a moment of dizziness, she fell forward, and I stepped over Ellis to catch her.

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Waaa. He's dead, the son of a...Yeah.

  • Mood: Vengeful
  • Listening to: I have no idea.
  • Reading: Jack's Run
  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: ATV Offroad Fury 4
  • Eating: Hamburger Helper
  • Drinking: Coke

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  • Current Residence: Eating your pillows
  • Interests: Anime, Drawing, Writing, and popcorn. Oh, and eating socks.
  • Favourite movie: Full Metal Alchemist, The Conqerour of Shamballa; Pirates of the Carribean 2
  • Favourite band or musician: Staind and Toby Mack
  • Favourite genre of music: Christian Rock
  • Favourite artist: Toby Mack
  • Favourite poet or writer: Robert Frost; Jenny Nimmo
  • Favourite style of art: Fanstasy and Anime
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  • Favourite game: Tales of Symphonia
  • Favourite cartoon character: Garfield
  • Personal Quote: That's a load of crap.
  • Tools of the Trade: Pencil, Typewriter, Sketchbook, Computer

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Lol.

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wa? sorry i dont think i quite understood your comment over on my Esk pic
Wa, I saw a picture of an Esk once, but I didn't know it was called an esk, and I named it Esk.....Maybe I'm just weird.

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